My Winter

unwanted grey hair
slow death finds me unaware…
snowflakes in my chair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Bagnall Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 5:15 AM
Interesting point of view, cleverly put. Nice write.
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 9:02 PM
Oh, this is so sad. The inevitable winter of our lives!!
Mehta Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 6:44 PM
Very awesome Senryu with nice images, Robb
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace