My Winds of Victory

The color of wind changes
Into the bliss sun today
A new change of sight
Tonight shall be the perfect night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 9:43 PM
John, I enjoyed reading your poem here. Soupmail.
Mehta Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 5:13 PM
You have penned very lovely thoughts on My winds of Victory. But will you please give once over to the syllable count if you mean it to be a haiku, John
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March 5, 2011 at 2:52 PM
Sounds like a wonderful place to be. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing. Karen
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