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My Wife Blooms Cm

The fragrance of a body swells Like wafts from an orchard-- I caress her rich plum blossoms And laying under stars We inhabit each other’s core Gazing at paradise-- On our twentieth greens of life She remains my heartmate. Choose An Octavio Paz Line , Nette Onclaud Contest 23rd August 2019 1. "The night was a garden of eyes.”

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Date: 8/31/2019 10:47:00 PM
Gabby, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/30/2019 5:08:00 PM
splendid imagery and so romantic. Congrats, Gabby
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Date: 8/30/2019 12:45:00 AM
for its purity of depth and subtle sensuality, this poem makes me sigh, gabbyi... thanks for entering this gem and sincere congrats on your fine spot...so, is it your 20th anniversary?... huggs
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Date: 8/28/2019 9:08:00 AM
A very touching poem, Gabby!
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Date: 8/24/2019 8:01:00 AM
Ooh la la, a natural beauty.
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Date: 8/23/2019 2:21:00 PM
Well done, Gabby! Your romantic muse has definitely bloomed! In my humble opinion...a winner. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/30/2019 7:37:00 AM
back with deserved congratulations, Gabby...once again, well done! // paul

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