My Wife Blooms Cm

The fragrance of a body swells Like wafts from an orchard-- I caress her rich plum blossoms And laying under stars We inhabit each other’s core Gazing at paradise-- On our twentieth greens of life She remains my heartmate. Choose An Octavio Paz Line , Nette Onclaud Contest 23rd August 2019 1. "The night was a garden of eyes.”
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Roper Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 10:47 PM
Gabby, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 5:08 PM
splendid imagery and so romantic. Congrats, Gabby
Onclaud Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 12:45 AM
for its purity of depth and subtle sensuality, this poem makes me sigh, gabbyi... thanks for entering this gem and sincere congrats on your fine spot...so, is it your 20th anniversary?... huggs
Sergi Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 9:08 AM
A very touching poem, Gabby!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Ooh la la, a natural beauty.
Callus Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Well done, Gabby! Your romantic muse has definitely bloomed! In my humble opinion...a winner. Regards // paul
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:37 AM
back with deserved congratulations, Gabby...once again, well done! // paul
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