"my Week of Peace" (Internal Rhyme)

(Internal rhyme)

One week of peace, I’ll watch the geese,
 Maybe fly southeast, or maybe southwest,
It will be their quest, I’ll be their guest,
 As geese fly east, I will watch in peace,
And sit on my fleece, as geese fly east.

Inherit my wings, give flying a fling,
 And see if it brings, winter or spring,
Summer again, or a winter benign,
 Nature will win, doing it all again,
Season’s cycle, by Angel Michael,
 Life’s natural recycle.

Fall weather’s best, within to get rest,
 Visit Oktoberfest, a very trying test,
Disturbing my rest, being no more a guest,
 Pokka dancing storm, advances age alarm,
Finished with that, just play with cat,
 Until he spits, then I’ll quit,
Then I’ll get!.. a chair…
 and  just sit!

For: A Week To Do As I Please
In Honor of Carol Brown and contest!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Congrats, John. Great write. Nice going. Ralph
Roberts Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 2:36 PM
lovely entry John, congrats on your win in the contest
Neels Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 5:27 AM
John, congratulations on your win in Carol's contest.. This one made me smile, hope your week has been a good one :) Wilma
Mehta Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 12:27 AM
John, Congrats on notching 1st place in contest.... Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta
Mannan Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 9:04 PM
I love this week of yours. Many congratulations dear Moses for this wonderful win.
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 2:39 PM
This is super cool how you did the internal rhyme, john. I really enjoyed it. Congrats! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, John
Sweetheart Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:46 PM
Congrats Moses on your first place win in Carol's contest with this amazing entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot with so many peers today with luv..
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations and thank you John for taking the time to enter my contest. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 8:11 AM
Hi John ;) are you doing another sonnet contest? Cause that's what I see?
Guzzi Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 2:26 PM
Just dropping in to say in my verse "The Foil" I was saying that Lucifer's fall and how he suffers has stopped many humans from straying onto the wrong path so in affect he is responsible for me being a good person. (Sounds like a FUN week ;) Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 10:42 AM
cool entry , good luck in the contest
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