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My Weary Heart

I've built a fortress round my weary heart which cannot be penetrated by your arrows and darts the moat around it is frozen to its core with a no ice skating sign hanging on my front door your excuses are lame regarding your eminent domain my drawbridge is now officially closed from all your pain 6-17-18

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/23/2018 9:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, Cheryl, love the beautiful imagery :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/23/2018 9:55:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Eve; I really appreciate it!~Hugs Che :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/22/2018 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this poem showing determination and self esteem. Well-written.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/23/2018 7:54:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Susan; I really appreciate it!~Che :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/21/2018 12:01:00 AM

Congratulations for the well deserved top placement, Cheryl ...

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/23/2018 7:54:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Probir; I really appreciate it!~Che :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/20/2018 8:19:00 PM

Sometimes anger and hurt compels us to harden to protect what's soft and vulnerable on the inside. A beautiful metaphoric write Cheryl.. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/20/2018 8:35:00 PM

I agree Susan; although I am really a softy at heart lol! Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit; I really appreciate it! Warmest wishes to you too my poetic friend!~Che :)

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/20/2018 7:09:00 PM

Congratulations Cheryl on your first place win. Mick

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/20/2018 7:50:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Mick; I really appreciate it!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/20/2018 7:07:00 PM

- An excellent poem on 6 lines, Cheryl :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise: )

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/20/2018 7:49:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Anne-Lise; I agree it must have been difficult for S/O! Thanks again! Hugs~Che :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/20/2018 4:23:00 PM

Congrats cheryl on your first place win..excellent poetry.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/20/2018 7:48:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and for visit Vijay; I really appreciate it!~Che :)

Silent One

Date: 6/20/2018 3:19:00 PM

Sometimes we have to build a fortress to protect ourselves Che.... Great 6 lines.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/20/2018 7:47:00 PM

I agree S/O..Thanks so much for very kind congrats and for placing me as one of the first place winners...I Really Appreciate it!!!~Che :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/18/2018 8:25:00 AM

A nice read for me, Cheryl ... emotions very well expressed ...

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/18/2018 8:38:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Probir; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/18/2018 7:14:00 AM

It's sad when one has to resort to such measures' but sometimes it has to be done. Tom

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/18/2018 7:48:00 AM

Yes it definitely is...thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Lyric Man

Date: 6/18/2018 4:15:00 AM

Cheryl, you have a way with words. You creatively put the guy in your write into his place. I love it! Please come see me again girl!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/18/2018 8:42:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Chance; glad you enjoyed it and will do!~Che :)