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My Way Continues

complicated by your mysterious eyes and then you smiled my way. incompliant hair, teased by the brawny solar wind, potently alluring. my pulse swoons at your flawless turquoise eyes, their iconic sway. i thought i’d play it cooly (let’s be honest beg) give up everything. your smile arced my way. your feet followed suit. my tinman- mouth display at your provocative pursuit. your charm like a diamond cave, a knight shining, loosened my mine — all sparkles from my full mouth of teeth, my gums reveal score. the stage illuminates, hugs us with its warmth; this fame divine. you turn out to be sweet and nice, a bit introverted, and i adore. our hands they touched, electricity in synch, our hearts are complete. never’d believe how we were meant for each other, when first we’d meet. 2/2/2020 Fiction

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Date: 2/3/2020 1:48:00 PM
Fiction???? Really? Lol. I thought you had guests....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 11:43:00 AM
LOL, Silent! :)
Date: 2/3/2020 9:53:00 AM
What a wonderful love poem...too bad it's fiction. Though love can be anything we want it to be or see.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2020 1:33:00 PM
My love has brown eyes...but sometimes you have to write outside your box! :)
Date: 2/3/2020 12:21:00 AM
Your way sure is a lot more electric than Frank Sinatra's version! -- By a country mile! Smiles, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2020 5:38:00 AM
lol...thanks, my friend!

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