My Voice

words stitched
on a thread of silence---
my voice




© kash poet 2012
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Placement:3rd

Contest: Contest no. 183 (June 2012)

Sponsor:Brian Strand

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Robert A. Dufresne

June 20, 2012 at 5:34 PM

excellent in many ways Kash. Congratulations to you. A joy to read and easy to see why it's a winner.

Sashi Prabhu

June 19, 2012 at 7:21 PM

congrats..simplicity enamelled with a powerful meaning!!!!!!

Debbie Guzzi

June 17, 2012 at 2:13 PM

Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

Olusegun Arowolo

June 15, 2012 at 1:23 PM

Nice piece,Kash...Congratulations on your win...

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 15, 2012 at 11:37 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#183" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary

June 15, 2012 at 11:06 AM

Congratulations on your winning Haiku... another pearl... Terry

Andrea Dietrich

June 15, 2012 at 8:01 AM

WELL deserved win, Kashinath. I'd give it higher than third!! Congrats.

Joann Grisetti

June 15, 2012 at 7:41 AM

congratulations on your winning poem.

Nette Onclaud

June 15, 2012 at 6:58 AM

homerun!... congrats on your fine win, kashi buddy..:) huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

June 15, 2012 at 6:43 AM

Congrats on your win, Kash, with this exceptional haiku! Love it!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Gwendolen Song

June 15, 2012 at 4:56 AM

Congrats on further success with this powerful haiku...such a MAGICAL THREAD! :)

Gwendolen Song

May 23, 2012 at 5:05 AM

Back to ponder this silence once more. Very nice haiku. .....glad your wave lengeth is adjusted also! Is this a medical procedure or a rest? G.

Nette Onclaud

May 22, 2012 at 11:45 AM

you gotta give a new one, kashi buddy... ohmmm.. :) huggs!

Terry L. Allen

May 22, 2012 at 2:04 AM

These 3 little phrases say so much. You once again have been my muse. I will call it Silence.

Terry L. Allen

May 22, 2012 at 2:06 AM

oops! Huggs TLee

Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2012 at 9:18 PM

hmmm, I see you have not put a new one since last time I was able to see poems here. Are you also busy, kashinath?

Nette Onclaud

May 21, 2012 at 1:26 AM

oh kashi romeo, where art thou, lol..:) huggs and hello!

Debbie Duncan

May 20, 2012 at 8:32 AM

I do like this ,, enjoy reading it ,,,, thank you for reading my poem on KHAN ;} yes he is back in India now,,, I knew him for 17 year !

Wilma Neels

May 18, 2012 at 11:18 PM

Awesome Kash ;-) enjoy the weekend ahead!

Harry Horsman

May 18, 2012 at 8:58 AM

wonderful poem is this, Kash, love your words, so strong here. harry

Nette Onclaud

May 18, 2012 at 4:27 AM

things we cannot say, kashi... a stirring ku with a kick in the end.. wowie!.. come over.. winning huggs! :)

Brenda Victoria Northeast

May 18, 2012 at 4:13 AM

I love this line- on a thread of silence it has a silent ring to it- blessings and well done, Brenda : )

Gwendolen Song

May 17, 2012 at 9:46 PM

I will TURN UP my hearing aids then....haha...beautiful image! :) Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

May 17, 2012 at 9:08 PM

wow, you must be barely whispering. but anyway, I LOVE this.

David Williams

May 17, 2012 at 4:15 PM

Kash, great haiku, hope you dont lose your words..David

Debra Squyres

May 17, 2012 at 2:39 PM

very good haiku....sometimes silence is best.

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