My View of Heaven

Sapphires, rubies, emeralds, garnets, gold, silver, and topaz
Compared to our super beautiful heaven have no pizzazz.
This mystical magical angel empowering kind place 
Is completely indescribable by the human race.
Lit by the glory of our loving omniscient God’s lit hue, 
this place is more vivid than the famous gem, Oppenheimer Blue.
There are twelve gates, twelve archangels, patiently waiting in line
 to welcome you to your self-actualized own sublime.
Gold and silver mountains that make Mount Everest seem small, 
embrace newly-arriving anticipating souls, one and all.
Colors more vivid than a mere human eye can decipher
 surround a heavenly novice, if they are not hyper.
The hyper are introduced to colors cool and calm
that play on their emotions like a soothing love song.
The magnificence of this cannot be gleaned,
It takes a bit of time to completely be seen.

*RHYMING     Describe Heaven Poetry Contest        Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal

Date 8/28/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/19/2018 3:14:00 AM
Many congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, your poem was really nice and I absolutely love reading your description of the heaven, good luck and have a really nice day
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/19/2018 7:03:00 AM
Thank you so much; your contests are always an amazingly wonderful challenge. I cannot wait to see what your brain will concoct next.
Date: 9/16/2018 7:39:00 PM
Great imagery of heaven, Caren, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/16/2018 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 9/16/2018 6:35:00 PM
Lovely, peaceful imagery of Heaven and its wonders, Caren. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/16/2018 1:38:00 PM
Well done, Caren. Beautiful. Congrats on your win.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/16/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Line. I am always surprised, but pleased.
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