Tim Smith Poet Acrostic

My Valentine

In the depths of the night I swear I saw your halo
Drifting above,  when my thoughts were calm
Ornate but simple  like the humble daisy
Lovely and stunning from flower to bulb
Oh how I dreamt that you could be mine
Vision of beauty as the belle of the ball
Enchanting the evening as we waltz to and fro
You had my heart and I knew it was luv
O my beloved, my truth,  my valentine
Until death do we part, to you, my love, I bid

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Eve Roper February 15, 2017 at 1:14 PM I love this hugs

Roy Pett February 14, 2017 at 8:05 AM this is so clever and meaningful Tim, great acrostic.

Arthur Vaso February 13, 2017 at 9:55 PM Beautiful, loved the double acrostic!

Charlie Smith February 13, 2017 at 9:44 PM Lovely Tim, even brought a stir to my loins. I did'nt really say that...

Chris Hagy February 13, 2017 at 6:28 PM So clever and lovely...would go perfect inside a Valentine's Day card!:)

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2017 at 5:59 PM what an awesome message on both sides of your acrostic, Tim. CUTE

Carolyn Devonshire February 13, 2017 at 2:38 PM Many of us ladies have never received a Valentine message as beautiful as yours! My your true love enjoy waltzing with you and returning your affection this Valentine's Day. Lovely, Tim!

Jean Murray February 13, 2017 at 1:29 PM That sure is one lucky beloved. Romance is in the air Tim.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2017 at 12:44 PM - Lovely and great done, Tim ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands February 13, 2017 at 11:49 AM This is excellent Tim. ! So well written and very sweet :)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 13, 2017 at 9:37 AM I think your Valentine must be thrilled my friend, Tim! Perfect! A seven!

Richard Lamoureux February 13, 2017 at 9:16 AM As always you do Raman every with flair!

Jan Allison February 13, 2017 at 8:54 AM what a wonderful double acrostic Tim I know how difficult these are to do:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop February 13, 2017 at 8:19 AM This is extremely beautiful Tim..Enchanting....A fave.

Probir Gupta February 13, 2017 at 8:09 AM Very nice ... Enjoyed so much ...

Chris Green February 13, 2017 at 6:43 AM This is great Tim and I can tell not very easy to do, though you made it look easy. Tim Smith February 13, 2017 at 6:45 AM Thanks Chris. For the right person nothing is ever to hard.

Darren White February 13, 2017 at 6:40 AM Owww Tim, so fantastic how you did this.... Great acrostic! Tim Smith February 13, 2017 at 6:43 AM Thanks my friend