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My Valentine

In the depths of the night I swear I saw your halo Drifting above, when my thoughts were calm Ornate but simple like the humble daisy Lovely and stunning from flower to bulb Oh how I dreamt that you could be mine Vision of beauty as the belle of the ball Enchanting the evening as we waltz to and fro You had my heart and I knew it was luv O my beloved, my truth, my valentine Until death do we part, to you, my love, I bid

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/15/2017 1:14:00 PM
I love this hugs
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Date: 2/14/2017 8:05:00 AM
this is so clever and meaningful Tim, great acrostic.
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Date: 2/13/2017 9:55:00 PM
Beautiful, loved the double acrostic!
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Date: 2/13/2017 9:44:00 PM
Lovely Tim, even brought a stir to my loins. I did'nt really say that...
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Date: 2/13/2017 6:28:00 PM
So clever and lovely...would go perfect inside a Valentine's Day card!:)
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Date: 2/13/2017 5:59:00 PM
what an awesome message on both sides of your acrostic, Tim. CUTE
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Date: 2/13/2017 2:38:00 PM
Many of us ladies have never received a Valentine message as beautiful as yours! My your true love enjoy waltzing with you and returning your affection this Valentine's Day. Lovely, Tim!
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Date: 2/13/2017 1:29:00 PM
That sure is one lucky beloved. Romance is in the air Tim.
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Date: 2/13/2017 12:44:00 PM
- Lovely and great done, Tim ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2017 11:49:00 AM
This is excellent Tim. ! So well written and very sweet :)
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Date: 2/13/2017 9:37:00 AM
I think your Valentine must be thrilled my friend, Tim! Perfect! A seven!
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Date: 2/13/2017 9:16:00 AM
As always you do Raman every with flair!
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Date: 2/13/2017 8:54:00 AM
what a wonderful double acrostic Tim I know how difficult these are to do:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/13/2017 8:19:00 AM
This is extremely beautiful Tim..Enchanting....A fave.
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Date: 2/13/2017 8:09:00 AM
Very nice ... Enjoyed so much ...
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Date: 2/13/2017 6:43:00 AM
This is great Tim and I can tell not very easy to do, though you made it look easy.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/13/2017 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Chris. For the right person nothing is ever to hard.
Date: 2/13/2017 6:40:00 AM
Owww Tim, so fantastic how you did this.... Great acrostic!
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/13/2017 6:43:00 AM
Thanks my friend

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