My Valentine

Life without you is always tough
I can spend my whole life with you 
But I can never get enough
You affect whatever I do
When I’m crying in sadness you make me laugh.

A week seems to be a night
And a year just flows like a stream
Every time I’m with you , time goes before I hold you tight
When you go away I just wish to make it a dream
So that when I wake up you should be in my sight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gasun Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 11:12 PM
Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear Walani! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 10:04 PM
An amazing win! CONGRATULATIONS!
A   Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 4:50 PM
Walani... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA
Haick Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Walani! Annalise
Guzzi Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 10:43 AM
Congrad's on your win in this contest, it wasn't an easy challenge! Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 8:45 AM
Congrats on we'll deserved win.
Poet Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Romantic and passionate!Enjoyed the read.
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