My Valentine

Thumping, overflowing
Love out of control for you...
My entrusted heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 14, 2012 at 7:43 PM
Nice poem carol, I enjoyed reading it.
Grundy Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 5:16 PM
Beautiful!! Thank you for posting this Carol, loved reading it! :) have a lovely end to your weekend.
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February 2, 2012 at 3:51 PM
thank you, you do have some very fine poetry of your own. ...my valentine is one of the best.....
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:56 PM
that's a good Valentine, Carol. Hope to see it in the winners' circle.
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January 30, 2012 at 3:28 PM
Thank you, Carol, it is always a pleasure to participate. That's what I call a 'bottom line' Valentine message. God bless, Love, Maureen
Sivey Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 2:22 PM
Beautifully romantic, I love romance, romance at it's best can swoon any woman! And I try to do my best with my sweetheart! Great Work!!
Dennis Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 8:46 AM
love it!
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January 30, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Lovely sentimental Senryu for your valentine !!
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