The Situation Poet Prose Poetry

My Valantine

if you knew how much i loved you
if you knew how much i cared
only if you knew the melody
i hear each time i stare
if you knew the rainbows
that you make while your around
and conceived the glitter of diamonds
while i looked into your eye's
the glowing of perils and ivory
every time you smile
the picture of the glory
your hair apon a crown
to me a ficticios story
of how a princess loved a clown
something that you give me 
just by being around

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Elizabeth Wesley January 13, 2012 at 8:52 PM How come all the romantic men are out there and I get stuck with men that think of their stomachs. Do you mind if I take this one personally? Too sweet to not have it whispered in my ear! Luv, Lizzie P S So you think I should repost? Nice comment and thanks!

Lucinda Bulger March 2, 2011 at 8:40 AM A LIL' Late, thanking you for your kind comment on Lonesome road. Just wanted to wish you the best of the best, life ain't perfect is it? smile though, what a nice, loving poem this is for your love. It touched me. :) Cindy aka Lucinda

John Rhinem February 14, 2011 at 11:00 PM S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```S*I*T*U*A*T*I*O*N A*M*I*D”V*E*R*Y L*O*V*E*L*Y¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 12, 2011 at 10:44 PM Dear Situation, Superb Tribute to YOUR Heart's Valentine YOU must LOVE her very Much Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM " My Valentine Candy Sweet " A very brotherly Defensive Statement for the " SweetHeart of the Soup "Did YOU read Her comment?" YOUR Liege Always...HG

Phyllis Babcock February 11, 2011 at 7:18 AM A wonderful tribute to your lady love. God Bless Phyl

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2011 at 5:31 PM such a sweet tribute for your lady. Love the line about the melody you hear just staring at her. I just saw the movie blue Valentine, about a marriage going south. the beginning of their courtship was romantic like this poem. Luv, Andrea

John Loving Iii January 27, 2011 at 5:32 PM wonderfully writen. john h loving iii

Julie Heckman January 27, 2011 at 5:27 PM This is a lovely poem comparing your lover to everything valuable.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 27, 2011 at 12:44 PM Nice thoughts well expressed on the valentine , The situation