My Untitled Poem

The words I said to you was what I meant
Is what you remember that summer
When you gave me your number
These halls are so empty and narrow
It's like my heart has been shot by an arrow
Why can't we ride, I just wanted to stay by your side
I want you more and more
Living without you is like a chore
We made a different turn, yet we never learn
You haven't treated me well
I still have to come out of my shell
This is our night,
To do this right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 22, 2008 at 7:05 PM
i thought this was good. keep writing man i like your work.
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