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My Undying Love

Tears surge as I revisit the pages

My mind clears, I recollect the stages


As we held hands and walked a promise path

of the undreamed hope since we said “I do”

Shook the dust of discarded past and grew

Adieu ,  were not intended  for our breath

I lie in comfort  upon your lap,   scathe,

breathing deep, your saintly healing  come through



Ought,  slumber peaceful? 

My soul burst with your absence

full with equanimity 


My unmoving wing extends forth to bring you home. You shall live till time is due
9/29/2016 Three Style II - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo
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Nayak Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 2:52 AM
Dear Eve, congratulations on your great win! ! very sweet and touchy poem!//love, Anu:)
Dutta Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Big congrats to win. Simply lovely poem. Hugs.
Nusker Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 11:23 AM
A wonderful poem. Congrats on your win, Eve.
Scars Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 11:02 AM
so romantic lovely Eve! You touched my heart and reminded me of my sweet hubby :)congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
Sathasivam Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 6:05 AM
Lovely. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 8:53 AM
A beautiful piece.
Daniel Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 3:48 AM
This one is sure to win, Eve:) so beautifully written:) well done:)
Gupta Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 7:10 AM
Very nice verse ... All the best ...
Roper Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 12:52 PM
Thank you, Probir, : ) Hugs Eve
Munoz Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 2:24 AM
Bravo well penned please feel free to check out my work.
Roper Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 12:52 PM
Thank you, Shawn, : ) Hugs Eve
Trifiatis Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 1:24 AM
Tender and loving all the way dear, Eve. Good luck!
Roper Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 12:52 PM
Thank you, Demetrios, : ) Hugs Eve
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