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My Undying Love

Tears surge as I revisit the pages

My mind clears, I recollect the stages


As we held hands and walked a promise path

of the undreamed hope since we said “I do”

Shook the dust of discarded past and grew

Adieu ,  were not intended  for our breath

I lie in comfort  upon your lap,   scathe,

breathing deep, your saintly healing  come through



Ought,  slumber peaceful? 

My soul burst with your absence

full with equanimity 


My unmoving wing extends forth to bring you home. You shall live till time is due
9/29/2016 Three Style II - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 10/23/2016 2:52:00 AM
Dear Eve, congratulations on your great win! ! very sweet and touchy poem!//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/22/2016 1:09:00 PM
Big congrats to win. Simply lovely poem. Hugs.
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Date: 10/22/2016 11:23:00 AM
A wonderful poem. Congrats on your win, Eve.
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Date: 10/22/2016 11:02:00 AM
so romantic lovely Eve! You touched my heart and reminded me of my sweet hubby :)congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
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Date: 10/3/2016 6:05:00 AM
Lovely. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 10/1/2016 8:53:00 AM
A beautiful piece.
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Date: 10/1/2016 3:48:00 AM
This one is sure to win, Eve:) so beautifully written:) well done:)
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Date: 9/30/2016 7:10:00 AM
Very nice verse ... All the best ...
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/30/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you, Probir, : ) Hugs Eve
Date: 9/30/2016 2:24:00 AM
Bravo well penned please feel free to check out my work.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/30/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you, Shawn, : ) Hugs Eve
Date: 9/30/2016 1:24:00 AM
Tender and loving all the way dear, Eve. Good luck!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/30/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios, : ) Hugs Eve
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