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My True Love

My true love promised me a car a Jaguar Mind you British racing car blue My true love promised me a coat Cashmere True wool from Pashmina goat My true love promised me a dance slow with soul wet like sweat or rain in winter My true love promised me a song Flawless like Minnie Riperton Yet so sad Still riveting

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Date: 10/9/2017 2:21:00 AM
Charming write - I enjoyed the rhythm and flow! Blessings!
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M Braimah Saaka
Date: 10/9/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thanks.

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