My True Love

My true love
promised me
a car
a Jaguar
Mind you
British racing car
blue

My true love
promised me
a coat 
Cashmere
True wool
from Pashmina
goat

My true love
promised me
a dance
slow with soul
wet like sweat
or rain
in winter

My true love 
promised me
a song
Flawless like
Minnie Riperton
Yet so sad
Still riveting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 2:21 AM
Charming write - I enjoyed the rhythm and flow! Blessings!
Saaka Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Thanks.
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