My Tree Haiku

though scarred yet stands
primal forest colossus
aided withstood flame

PS Syllable counter: 5,7,5
8 August 2019
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Roper Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 11:43 PM
Magnificent imagery, Geoffrey. Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve
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August 26, 2019 at 2:09 PM
Many thanks, Eve
Ashley Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 9:42 PM
Wonderful imagery, Geoffrey. Congratulations on your win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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August 26, 2019 at 2:09 PM
Thank you very much, Susan.
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Congrats for your win, Geoffrey.
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August 26, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Thanks, Andrea
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August 22, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Congrats your win, Geoffrey! Blessings, Kim
Brewer Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 2:06 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Love the image and the imagery... isn't mother nature incredible! :-) hugs Jan xx
Brewer Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 2:04 PM
She certainly is. Thanks, Jan xx
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August 22, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Congrats on your win, Geoffrey.
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August 26, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Thanks, Line
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August 22, 2019 at 7:23 AM
It always amazes me when a giant tree is burned and scared and still standing. Congrats on your imagery and win.
Brewer Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Thank you Jeanne
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August 22, 2019 at 6:10 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Geoffrey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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August 26, 2019 at 2:01 PM
Many thanks, Anne-Lise.
Romios Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 10:18 AM
Love trees and your haiku Panagiota
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:27 AM
We share the love.Thanks, Panagiota
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