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My Time Is Up

My time is up Death is near I'll put on a brave face I'll hide my fear Of the unknown Where will I go? When death is bestowed upon me Is it endless sleep? Will it all go dark? Will I meet my family at Heavens Gate? Maybe I'll burn in hell for lack of faith Will I be judged on my time here? Questions asked when deaths so near If you only live once Then I die with regrets Because like a bad student, I have failed most test

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/23/2012 6:29:00 PM
wow deep,love your mind Carmen,check my When I Die
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Carmen Castro
Date: 7/23/2012 6:34:00 PM
I'll check it out right now
Date: 7/23/2012 4:37:00 PM
Our beliefs about death are conditioned by our thoughts about life. Maybe each individual has a unique experience at death...
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Carmen Castro
Date: 7/23/2012 6:25:00 PM
I hope you're right.. I wrote this after one of my lovely nightmares... I like to think that when we go we either create our own Heaven or Hell

Book: Shattered Sighs