My Thoughts To Yours

at first i showed no interest in you, 
forgive me i misjudged, 
i didnt think your interest in me was true 

i havent known you that long, 
2 months topps, 
we had our date which was fun, 
a lot in commom, that's what my eye caught, 

i dont know what the future holds, 
time will tell 
hopefully something will unfold, 

my impresson of you is a good one, 
you seem like a girl that cant be compared to none, 

the kiss you left me 
was unregrettable 
im dying for more 
it was unforegettable (to me), 

im not jumping to conclusions, 
i dont want to get attached, 
dont want my hearts confusion, 
dont want the same problems as my last, 

i give this warning as a start, 
im searching for commitment 
dont mess wit theis suckers heart 

all i ask for respect and honesty 
if im not the man u want 
then let me be 
Otherwise IM YOURS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 3/3/2010 5:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Leonardo. Looking forward to reading more of your writing. Love, Carol
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