My Thoughts

I was given wings but was never taught how to fly
living in this would for many its do or die
my future is blind my review of the would is negative
so many wants to take not many wants to give

unknown foes and only a few friends
grown into this would but could never comprehen
the way we live fighting while young ones cry
creating world wars the only thing we gain is death for you and i
forgive my thoughts for pointing this out
true to life thats what i'm about
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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