My Thoughts

Trying to drink my thoughts in a bottle
I found out my mind is sinking,
I see objects less,
My eyes are closing . 
My thought is having an earthquake
I sold old and bought a new thought
but my feet becomes cold
my thoughts are drowning
like I am swimming with sharks around me
my heart beats, 
as I think the blood is circulating around me
My thought whisper sounds of courage
As I am carried with a current of music
The notes are felt as I breath
my thought is poison
with trouble as i feel my cloths with tears.
my thoughts are built with as I go to sleep
and my dreams are structured.
this life of thought is fought till death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 22, 2009 at 10:02 PM
most of life probably of life we are "drowning" in our thought and trying to swim through them or tying to breath in them. Sometimes we could only breath when our minds are empty, but that oxygen could last for so long...very interesting, nice imagery.
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