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My Thoughts

Trying to drink my thoughts in a bottle I found out my mind is sinking, I see objects less, My eyes are closing . My thought is having an earthquake I sold old and bought a new thought but my feet becomes cold my thoughts are drowning like I am swimming with sharks around me my heart beats, as I think the blood is circulating around me My thought whisper sounds of courage As I am carried with a current of music The notes are felt as I breath my thought is poison with trouble as i feel my cloths with tears. my thoughts are built with as I go to sleep and my dreams are structured. this life of thought is fought till death

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Date: 11/22/2009 10:02:00 PM
most of life probably of life we are "drowning" in our thought and trying to swim through them or tying to breath in them. Sometimes we could only breath when our minds are empty, but that oxygen could last for so long...very interesting, nice imagery.
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