Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Quintain (English)

My Tethered Soul

My soul is a wanderer,
My mind an amazing maze,
No matter how far I wander
I stagger back within my gaze--
As a tethered horse graze!


06/15/15
For "Five lines / Metaphors & Simile" contest by Sara Kendrick

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Jill Spagnola July 7, 2015 at 1:25 PM Extreme beauty in both form and verse, jill

Skat A June 30, 2015 at 10:45 PM :) Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**

Alexis Y. June 30, 2015 at 9:59 PM Abdul, I just stopped by to say congratulations on getting 1st place in the contest. Excellent job! :-) Alexis

Lee Carter June 30, 2015 at 12:12 AM Congrats love your lines : )

Andrea Dietrich June 29, 2015 at 10:33 PM Hi, Abdul. Glad to see this one here, and congrats for your win. Abdul Malik Mandani June 30, 2015 at 9:30 AM I am glad you are glad. Thanks.

Mohamed Adel June 29, 2015 at 7:31 PM Congrats on your win,Abdul Malik, thoughtful poem :) Abdul Malik Mandani June 30, 2015 at 9:29 AM Thanks buddy.

Eve Roper June 29, 2015 at 6:30 PM Abdul, congratulations on your win, a 7 . I do real relate. Hugs eve Abdul Malik Mandani June 30, 2015 at 9:29 AM Thanks Eve. Appreciate much.

Sara Kendrick June 29, 2015 at 5:26 PM Thanks for this wonderful entry in my contest..I enjoyed reading it ..Congrats on your win..Sara Abdul Malik Mandani June 30, 2015 at 9:28 AM Wow, Sara! I really appreciate that. I knew I had something there. Thanks for confirming it for me.