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My Tear Drop

one single tear had shed from my eye all alone getting ready to die leaving his family and leaving his friends behind not knowing whats going to happen when he sheds from my crystal blue eye he's alone and going to die when he goes I will feel the stream of his body sliding away from my eye it's just another death his family will have to a wait all my tears will be dried up all because one single tear has shed from my eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/19/2009 8:04:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading your poem and it does make me feel the way i felt when i wrote some of mine, you too have a gift and thank you for your encouragement....Aleera
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Date: 1/15/2009 12:39:00 PM
Nice try, but this is hard to follow the meaning, guess too many tears were shed before they passed. This leaves the reader confused, thanks for sharring. Some poems are personal, maybe this one is. Judy Riley
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Date: 1/15/2009 10:54:00 AM
This is a beautiful and sad poem. It is well written and the piece grips at the heart in a strong way.
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