My Take On Age

The fourth dimension, on me, has left its mark, Before the coinciding of my dreams and visions, Cumulative years have made life become stark, Pre-dating a scarred heart from life’s incisions Once, without fear, of actions being thwarted, Would come a subtle wink, then a deep embrace. Now with eyes shuttered, I’m being transported, Back to earlier times where age allows no space; Age will always find you Better or Bitter! Tom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 12, 2015 at 7:57 PM
interesting read, had to read it twice trying to make sure I understood it. Like it a lot
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