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My Sweetheart

Her fares Feed my fainting frame. Her genial gesture Graces my gut. Her beauty Bands my body. Her care Clads my clay. Her spirituality Spurs my spirit. Her tender talk Tickles my thought. Her conviviality Is my compliment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/30/2013 12:51:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 12/26/2013 7:45:00 PM
Lovely poem with alliteration and congratulations on your fine win, seun
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Date: 12/26/2013 2:50:00 PM
Seun, good use of consonance in this lovely poem. I like the contrast between the sweetheart and you, but perhaps one more stanza (not required). Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/28/2013 2:15:00 AM
An elegant scenario of how sweetness could embrace someone...Lekau.
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Date: 11/24/2013 7:16:00 AM
- A very cute poem, Seun :) - well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2013 10:06:00 PM
Welcome! Lovely couplets you have shared...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/23/2013 6:25:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Light & Love
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Date: 11/23/2013 7:14:00 AM
- A lovely poem for your Sweetheart !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/22/2013 7:36:00 PM
Hi Seun, how sweet the light you share of her tenderness... xox...Linda
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Milton Manyass
Date: 11/23/2013 5:17:00 AM
This is a good piece of work. The tactful use of alliteraton drives the point home. Milton.

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