My Sweet Mom

copyright© shonima burman

Bright, beautiful and strong,
She is my sweet mom.
Dark is her eyes and bright is her complexion,
Her long flowing hair captures everybody's attention.
Loving, caring and flawless at her duty,
She is the perfect Indian beauty.
She nurtured me with immense love and care,
And always protected me from every evil and unfair.
I learned to appreciate this life from her,
Mom, you are just superb and I love you forever.


WRITTEN BY: SHONIMA BURMAN
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 30, 2015 at 12:03 AM
SHOIMA, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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December 28, 2015 at 10:43 PM
SHONIMA, Congratulations in Judy Konos contest... wuv SKAT
Allison Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 5:25 PM
what a wonderful tribute Shonima congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Burman Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 5:22 AM
Thank u so much Jan.....:)
Sietesantos Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 8:09 PM
I can see why this is such a big winner - it's an amazing tribute to a magnificent human being - your wonderful mother! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Pandita
Burman Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 2:18 AM
Thank u Pandita.
A   Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 3:12 AM
Shonima, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~
Burman Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 4:35 AM
Thank you so much....:)
Deschler Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 8:30 PM
A tender and heartfelt tribute to your Mom... Very nicely done! Congrats on your win!
Burman Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 4:35 AM
Thank you Kelly...:)
A   Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 8:03 AM
thank you for the reply
A   Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 1:12 PM
Shonima, Congratulations, on your awesome win.... Love Linda
Burman Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 1:07 AM
Thank you Linda.
Lindley Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 7:18 PM
Big congrats on your win!!
Burman Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 1:05 AM
Thank you Robert.
Nance Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 6:59 PM
that is great! what more can a mom ask for, such lovely words!
Burman Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 1:05 AM
Thank you Casarah.
Sietesantos Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 9:14 AM
Hi Shonima, huge congratulations on your TOP well-deserved win. Pandita
Burman Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Thank you Pandita
Ayala Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Shonima. Kika
Burman Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Thank You Kika
Mehta Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 4:36 AM
Nice tribute you have paid to your mom, Congrats. Shonima
Burman Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 5:41 AM
Thank you Dr.Mehta
Sietesantos Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Hi Shonima, thank you for sharing this beautiful tribute to your Mom! It is such a wonderful write! Warmest regards!
Burman Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:24 PM
Thank you Pandita. Thank you so much
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