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My Supreme Goddess Thou Art

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Author's Notes: This couplet, "My Supreme Goddess Thou Art," is a co-written poem that my colleague Liam McDaid and I had worked on together. It was originally completed on April 29, 2017. Liam posted it first on Poetry Soup on April 29, 2017. I wanted to take the opportunity now to post this wonderful poem again on my end, just in case any "Soup Readers" missed the first posting by Liam. The emphasis of this particular poem turns principally on the theme of eternal love or forever love and its shared nature between two people who are enchanted and enamored with one another -- appropriately so!! This couplet also addresses the shared love of the two people from both a mortal perspective here on Earth, and in an ethereal sense (after death) when their souls have moved on seeking their final destiny with God Himself. (Gary Bateman - June 5, 2017) (Couplet)

Categories: emotions, god, heaven, love, metaphor, passion, and spiritual.

My Supreme Goddess Thou Art I can see Heaven clearly whilst gazing deeply in your eyes now, Where the sweet caramel melts deliciously into heartbeats pure. The radiant light of our eternal love dwells deep within our hearts, As our souls are captivated by God’s aura of divine enchantment. A nirvana fills our destiny as passionate lovers kissing softly so, Mesmerized by the enraptured emotions we forever shareth as one. A wild wondrous wallflower you are—shining now ever brightly, As that angelic spirit in mortal presence on Earth by God’s hand. Dearest one I sayeth truly now my supreme goddess thou art, As we holdeth one another in an ardent embrace by God’s grace. The fiery passion of our forever love is a pure beam of silken starlight, Which bathes the darkest depths of the cosmos in a heavenly radiance. What more can two people hope for in this world of finite limitations? Our shared love and rich emotions form the destiny we seek with God. Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, A Collaborated Poem Copyright © All Rights Reserved – April 29, 2017 (Couplet)

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/18/2017 3:39:00 PM

This is the ultimate love poem written by two of PoetrySoup's supreme poets! Such a beautiful blend of all the romantic and spiritual aspects of true love expressed for the beloved! Awesome write and kudos to you and Liam! Hugs. Pandita

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/20/2017 3:58:00 PM

Hello Pandita!! And thanks very much for your really gracious comments here on behalf of both Liam and me!! (I'm glad to see you've put us both in the "Supreme Poet" category. You are so sweet to say that, and I'm sure that Liam will like it too!!) BTW, that recent bilingual co-write that you and Mike had posted was truly wonderful poem indeed!! Best Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/11/2017 1:04:00 PM

also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments deeply appreciated

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/11/2017 6:47:00 PM

Ditto on my end too Liam!! Best, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/11/2017 1:02:00 PM

each time i read this gary with your golden pen it flies heavenwards touching deeply excellent from the word go it melts into the soul smiling always a pleasure mixing ink with you wishing you both a blessed week

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/11/2017 6:46:00 PM

Thanks Liam Mate!! This one did turn out very well. Beautiful and radiant words, imagery, and the flow of the verses!! Glad we could work on this one together!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/10/2017 8:01:00 AM

Thanks Keith, I know that both Liam and I are truly pleased that you took the time to ready our collaborated write here. It is indeed "sweet as the heavens." (Very well-put Keith!!) Cheers and Best, Gary

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 6/9/2017 10:31:00 AM

A great collaboration Gary, sweet as the heavens:-)

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/10/2017 8:02:00 AM

Thanks Keith, I know that both Liam and I are truly pleased that you took the time to read our collaborated write here. It is indeed "sweet as the heavens." (Very well-put Keith!!) Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/6/2017 5:34:00 AM

- It's a pleasure to read this for the second time, Gary ... An amazingly beautiful poem from you my friends - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/6/2017 4:21:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise!! This one did turn out very well. I know that Liam and I were quite pleased with the final version result. I know we're both glad you liked this couplet and its radiant message of "forever love." Cheers and Best, Gary

Kabutha Hempstone

Date: 6/6/2017 5:29:00 AM

Hello Sir Gary, This is so great.it's flow made me conceptualize it and I felt like I was there.I wanna write like you someday

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/6/2017 4:23:00 PM

Thanks Hempstone!! I'm very pleased to hear you enjoyed this couplet write. A love poem it definitely is!! Best Wishes, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/5/2017 6:12:00 PM

Hi Gary n' Liam!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + to each !(there's no rating box G, but to me you both deserve this and much more:)A Fav!:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/5/2017 6:16:00 PM

Thanks "D" so much!! Ingrid and I have not forgotten you. We both just returned from Stuttgart, Germany a few days ago. I working to get more poetry written and posted, but I'm also still involved in prose writes as well. (This one that Liam and I finished back toward the end of April, is a quite beautiful write.) Thanks too Dear One "D" for the FAVE!! Cheers, and best wishes always . . . G!!