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My Stupid Master

Come away my stupid master, Acceptable way i wish to plea- Driving me around with your decree... My year i cherished 1960. I fear no more of thy heat, Nor the furious winter's rages of thee ¡ Though thy hand so unbearable, Never i dismay of your edict. Come away my stupid master, Name rejected by all Afrika... Your life of command has come and gone. Here you are my stupid master, Roaming around like a wanderer. Running like a fastest cheetah... Never yee find a rest for a shelter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/15/2014 5:02:00 PM
Well done! Very creative write! Thank you for sharing! Kindest regards.
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Date: 5/8/2014 10:17:00 AM
yes, I remember this old winning poem... . Thank you so much for enjoying and supporting my "ANY POEM" contest...... Stop by my latest blog --Raindrops and roses-- if you'd like to receive a cute Congratulations. Wishing all winning poets a great day. Love Linda :-)
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:47:00 PM
i really like the power in this poem..reminds me of jehladin rumi
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Date: 4/15/2014 11:09:00 PM
oo WOW! You express your free verse, with strong words... I love it... XOX~ Linda
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Date: 4/16/2014 3:12:00 AM
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Olatunji Samson
Date: 4/16/2014 3:11:00 AM
Thank you linda,but please try to tell me my errs.
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Olatunji Samson
Date: 4/16/2014 3:10:00 AM
Thank you linda,but please try to tell me my errs.

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