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My Struggle

You say I haven’t struggled But yet you don’t know Of the life I’ve lived The things I’ve done And the scars I wear My life’s been full Of struggles My life’s been like a roller coaster My life been full of pain Life has eaten me And spite me back out But yet you say I’m To “young” to know What it really means to struggle Have you walked in my shoes? Have you lived my Life for a day Have you done the things? I’ve done my whole life You say I haven’t struggled but I’ll tell you this Life alone is a struggle So before you criticize My life and pains and Say what I have and haven’t done Let me ask you Have you really struggled?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/13/2010 6:59:00 PM
You put your whole spirit in this one and I truly enjoyed it. Your age has nothing to do with your life experiences. Your struggle will only make you stronger and your gift to the world because of it will be your words. Monica
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Date: 6/2/2010 10:34:00 AM
STRONG WORDS, IT'S TRUE... YOU CAN'T JUDGE A PERSON LIKE THAT, THEY DON'T KNOW WHAT IT'S LIKE FOR OTHERS.. STUGGLE TO THEM IS A MYSTERY SOME OF US WILL ENDURE, BUT IT WILL MAKE US STRONGER
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