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My Strength and Shield

...for Juvie The light that guides me on my way while breezes blow and flowers sway; the touch that calms my weary head when I am hanging by a thread; the voice that soothes me into sleep, and urges Him my soul to keep; for all the blessings you bestow pray God, may it for e'er be so.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/18/2009 2:21:00 PM
pray God, may it for e'er be so.
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Date: 4/29/2009 10:13:00 PM
Dear Keith, YOU have perfected the Rhyme the flow so direct the message so full of compassion YOUR Talent is glaring Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 4/29/2009 4:53:00 PM
this is absolutely wonderful Keith!....ur choice of words are perfect as always n the flow is just great!....nicely done!...love n smiles Maryam*
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Date: 4/29/2009 8:08:00 AM
I love this piece! So much emotion that reaches out and grabs me. So serene yet so alive!
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Date: 4/29/2009 7:09:00 AM
Great phrasing Kieth. Enhances the flow very nicely especially the word order for the last line. Rolls very nicely off the tongue like all you write. Glad to know you have a love bubble to feel protected in. The world sucks huge without one of those. I don't know where I'd be without mine. Oh and I'll let my spell checker know you're proud it caught my misspelled 'miniscule':) -Yoni
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Date: 4/29/2009 7:06:00 AM
Aaah, the all compassionate one, who guides, forgives and cares, mending and molding us as we journey towards our goal... Such a lovely way with words here, thanks for sharing poet...kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/29/2009 4:40:00 AM
Good write! God truly is all mighty and He loves us all- darkpoet
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