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Time travails and tires
Life loves loss and lust
Death defies desire
Rest is rot and rust
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September 20, 2026 at 8:03 AM
I hope it’s okay that I’m commenting on my own poem. I challenged myself earlier this year to write a rhyming acrostic that also uses alliteration. Didn’t think it was possible. Turns out, it is!
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