My Starseed

Come with me, my starseed
Unveil the mystery of Atlantis
Feel the ancient to the core
An angel told me we belong

02.14.18

Second Place
"Romantic Charm 
in 4 Lines" by Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 9:19 PM
A most sublime piece! Hugs. Pandita
Flower Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 12:32 AM
Thank you for the kind words and sweetness, Pandita. :) hugs
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 8:49 PM
Rereading this one and I recall the song from the '60's Starshine. It is so sweet like that song.
Flower Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 12:34 AM
Yeah but I took it to refer to a 'soul' one. :) Thanks for the sweet lines, Andrea. :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 3:04 PM
Congrats on your win, Moon Flower. Very mystical and cosmic. Love it.
Flower Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 9:41 PM
Thank you, Line.
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 9:54 AM
I love this wonderful verse, Moon Flower, I thought I comment on your placement.. I see I didn't so congratulations on your win ... Hugs Eve ~`*
Flower Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Thank you, Eve. hugs
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 6:31 PM
What a sweet message in this one, Moon Flower. Congrats on your placement
Flower Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 9:44 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Andrea. :)
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:08 PM
- Congratulations my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 9:45 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
One Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:02 AM
A galactic take on the contest Moon... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
Flower Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, Silent O. :)
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 2:26 AM
- A very sweet poem, Moon Flower :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hugs. :)
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