My Star,My Heart, My Valentine

bird displays its wings
above flowing water fall...
my heart flows with joy

beds of nice flowers
the passion of hope and love...
my heart beats faster

love shines like the stars
which brighten the night and sky
would you be my star?



CONTEST:"(double)valentine Haiku &one questionku "sponsored by PD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gasun Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:37 PM
Congrats for another great write and win my dear friend! love/hugs, Leonora
Haick Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on another very fiine win, Olu!
A   Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 1:56 PM
OLUSEGUN, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 2:39 PM
wonderful set for the contest. your question in the questionku is so sweet.
Grisetti Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 2:35 PM
A wonderful entry for the contest. Best wishes for you.
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