My Spot Amongst The Bustle

Every day feels like a race
Always some job to do
Or person to please
I'm all over the place

I always thought it was just me
Looking to escape the madness
Even just for an hour
Somewhere to flee

I found a spot
For peace and quiet
And a cheeky little beverage
Which can't be too hot

I found a friend whilst there
Who sat with me amongst the bustle
They liked me for me
And my flaws? They didn't care

We spent many an hour eating toast 
Escaping the rat race together
Understanding each other
That's what I miss the most

I still go to my quiet place
Sit in my favourite spot
Before I head out to battle
But oh how I'd love to see their face

... Again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 7/19/2025 1:06:00 AM
This is such a tender, heartfelt piece, Maddy. You’ve captured that deep longing for quiet connection amidst life’s chaos so beautifully. The simple details—toast, a warm drink, a shared moment—make the memory feel alive. Truly moving.
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Date: 2/11/2024 9:51:00 AM
Very nice poem, Maddy. Well done!
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Maddy Rogers
Date: 2/11/2024 1:46:00 PM
Aww thank you :)
Date: 1/31/2024 5:23:00 AM
My brother and I had this little spot in Kent that we liked to chill at. A tiny haven in the city. Nice introductory poem and welcome to PS
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Maddy Rogers
Date: 1/31/2024 12:43:00 PM
Hi Tom x I used to have a little spot to myself next to my local cinema, then it closed :( so I ended up in one of the popular chains, but in a great snug-spot! Thanks for the welcome and I hope you're having a lovely week x
Date: 1/29/2024 2:07:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem, Maddy, welcome to Poetry Soup. PS may be virtual but it’s a great place to escape and make new friends. John
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Maddy Rogers
Date: 1/31/2024 12:44:00 PM
Thanks so much John I look forward to reading lots of poetry which I'm hoping will take my mind off all the stresses!
Date: 1/26/2024 11:30:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this Maddy. Enjoyed the read and look forward to seeing more of your peotry. Keep writing. Best wishes. Tony.
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Maddy Rogers
Date: 1/27/2024 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Tony, I really appreciate that x
Date: 1/26/2024 3:11:00 AM
I really like it Maddy ;) and welcome to Poetry Soup - you should reconnect with that friend of yours and tell them of your new poetry adventure. Nice job :)
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/26/2024 4:56:00 AM
Keep trying! Friendships are important but keep writing too! :)
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Maddy Rogers
Date: 1/26/2024 4:30:00 AM
Thank you, I fear I won't be able to reconnect with my friend which is sad as they meant so much to me. But I'll always be happy for the memories!
Date: 1/24/2024 11:08:00 PM
This is my first poem so please bear with me. Many thanks for reading x
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