My Spiritual Mom

Mom’s Bible stories 
my first words inspired to be. . . . 
that Jesus loves me

her best-loved motto -
what’s next to godliness. . . . 
eight kids cleaning up

feasting on Scriptures
strong in mind, body and soul. . . . 
Mom might outlive us

For Francine Robert's 
"Senryu for Mom" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Jones Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Andrea, this is a wonderfully penned piece of poetry. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Horsman Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 2:51 PM
like this wonderful dedication,,,
Horne Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 7:01 AM
This is your new oldest poem : ) I remember this sweet write, my friend
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 1:18 AM
Many congrats Andrea for coveted 2nd place in Francine's contest with imagination at its best in this one. Was away hence bit late in wishing/responding. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Creative win..Congrats..Sara
Falotico Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Many congrats Andrea!!! excellent work my dear...
Brown Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 12:35 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol
Aul Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Congrats on your win.....George
Freeman Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 11:49 AM
Andrea, Great to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your second place with this honored presentation. Agape, Moses
Neels Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Hey Andrea, congratulations on your win in Francine's contest, enjoyed reading this one again ;) love Wilma
Mehta Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Andrea
Poet Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 3:30 AM
Isn't this a great feeling Andrea when a poem on your Mom is rewarded!-kash
Poet Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 10:43 PM
Congrats Andrea on your win-kash
Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 10:40 PM
love the way this was created with much personal touch, andrea... congrats on the high win.. woohooo!:) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Congrats Andrea on your 2nd place win in Francine's contest with this lovely piece on Mom.. enjoy sweet success with luv.and HMD to u too..
Mannan Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 8:48 PM
I can imagine you listening to these lovely tales Andy. Many warm congrats for this win.
Long Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 6:22 PM
congratulations on your win..cory
Richards Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 5:57 PM
What a delightful winning poem, Andrea!! So nice to share with you !! Loved this!
Roberts Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 5:34 PM
wonderful set of senryus , congrats on your second place win in the contest
K. Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 1:26 AM
I actually missed writing for this one-- but I really like how you did yours, I can relate to this so much, my mom is also very spiritual-- I remember you saying something about her singing to God in the fields? That sure must be so awesome to hear that! Lovely way to write about your mom, Andrea-- has this contest been judged? Will email you a bit later ok? Sorry it took me some while to catch up on your poetry-- & eeo here I go missing again... hugs to you :)
Mehta Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 7:04 AM
Very affectionate and lovely tribute you paid to your mom, Andrea
Babcock Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 5:37 PM
yes, you never know our mothers could out live us. Love this poem. A mother's love never fails. love phyl
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Oh loved this one Andrea.Another Mother's day without my mom it sadden's my heart.Glad you liked the poem and thanks for the congrats.Same goes out to you.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Austin Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 3:18 PM
Great moms produce great kids. Love, daver
Aul Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 3:07 PM
Very much good luck in the contest....George
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