My Soulmate

My Soulmate

You are my poem, the rhythm of my heart,
Filling life with colours, a prism set apart.

Your eyes glistening, pearls of dewy grace,
Words melodious, a gentle coo to embrace.

The sun rises for the world, you're my aurora bright,
Weaving moments into life with your joyous light. 

Roses are lovely, and fragrant in my garden fair,
Yours is the vibrant colour, the sweet scent in the air

Mesmerizing tunes I play on life's flute,
You are my breath, O beauty absolute.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Shahein Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 8:29 PM
Such a lovely and touchy, delightful, romantic write , I've enjoyed every little word......This is a master piece my friend....hugs / / :) dalia
Makama Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 8:01 AM
Reading your pages brings enjoyment and ease at heart. I love your style of craft and this is definitely a 7 for me.
Bailey Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 2:18 PM
I enjoyed reading this piece Malik and how you put it together.Warm Regards "B"
Jamoner Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 1:40 PM
Such a Romantic poem. Really a touch of an artistic poet. ^^
Yaseen Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 11:17 PM
Many Many thanks Dear Doris, I am so obliged to pay you thanks for your words....
Seilheimer Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 11:24 PM
Very passionate, finding your soulmate really makes everything your everything, so loosing that takes everything
Yaseen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 2:58 AM
exactly, this thing matters more than anything in life.... thanks for your visit Dear Leah.. Friend Always,,, Malik
Deschler Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 2:17 AM
Finally finding a soul mate changes everything about life. Colors seem brighter, flowers smell sweeter, and the sun shines warmer on us.... I really enjoyed this beautiful poem, Malik. Very nicely done!.... Welcome to Poetry Soup. I am looking forward to reading more of your work!
Yaseen Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 2:26 AM
So nice of you Dear kelly, thanks for your kind words.. yeah really soulmate is the meaning of our life.
Phookan Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 6:45 AM
She'll be very happy to know this.. Beautiful words to your soul mate!You do write well Malik...
Yaseen Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 7:07 AM
Thanks for your sweet comment Gautami... god blesss
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 4:30 AM
- This is really beautiful and romantic, Malik - // Anne-Lise :)
Yaseen Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 4:37 AM
THANKS MANY MANY TIMES ANNE, YOU ARE SO KIND... HUGS
Anish Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 11:10 PM
Sounds like you have found the right one! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Yaseen Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 11:12 PM
Thanks Anish for stopping by and for a nice comment..
Sibanda Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Such a tender, peaceful and lovely couplet. Keep the ink dripping dear friend.
Yaseen Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 2:26 AM
really a sweet comment i got
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 7:31 PM
Very sweet and romantic Malik! Such a tenderness indeed sounds like the sweet music of flutes and violins. I really enjoyed reading this one my poet friend. Keep writing! Best wishes to you! xxxx D.
Yaseen Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Many many thanks Dorian for stopping by and for your warm and kind words.. God bless you, Friend Always... Malik
Breidenthal Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 4:14 PM
This is immensely peaceful and romantic. Your rhymes too flow so nicely...like a delightful tune resonating through the midnight air...luscious words...passionate and poetic in every sense. Love! Always, Laura
Yaseen Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 1:38 AM
Your words are ,much sweeter and nice than my poem. I feel pleasure that you dropped in and read my poem and felt it worthy. Your words reflect your kind heart... keep smiling always.. HUGS Malik
Lindley Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 9:33 AM
I like this write and its freshness. Keeping play that flute and writing my friend!!!
Yaseen Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 5:37 AM
Oh really a nice way of encouraging, yeah really i wish the flute remain with me and the breaths of beloved, melody will come on its own.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Wow!!endearing sweet write..:)
Yaseen Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 5:35 AM
sorry typing err. # thanks i mean :)
Yaseen Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 5:34 AM
Tanks for such a sweet reflection from a sweet poet
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