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My Soul

My mind-body and soul Yearning for heaven not life's whole Soul how you have cuddled me Over this past year in your love Ultimate blessings from heaven above Lighting up for all to see Date written: 12/7/2020 Note: Acrostic Rhyme 10 Place COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(40) any theme any form Contest Judged: 1/16/2021 Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 12/14/2020 11:42:00 AM

Beautiful poem with depth. Shining with the light of God for all to see.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2020 1:55:00 PM

Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your very kind words. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day with blessings..................

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2020 9:11:00 AM

This is lovely, Paula...not just an Acrostic, but also enriched by rhyme. ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/8/2020 2:08:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your very kind words. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day with blessings..................

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/7/2020 5:21:00 PM

Dear Paula, your poem is so beautiful, expressive, loving and filled with gratitude. I love the poetry form you used as well as the rhyme scheme. Simply splendid! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/8/2020 2:07:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your very kind words. So glad you like this one. I enjoyed writing it. Enjoy your day with blessings..................