My Soul

My mind-body and soul                                            

Yearning for heaven not life's whole                                                

 
 

Soul how you have cuddled me                                    

Over this past year in your love                                        

Ultimate blessings from heaven above                              

Lighting up for all to see                                                              

 

 

Date written: 12/7/2020                                                                 

Note: Acrostic Rhyme

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Schiavina Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 11:42 AM
Beautiful poem with depth. Shining with the light of God for all to see.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your very kind words. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day with blessings..................
Callus Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 9:11 AM
This is lovely, Paula...not just an Acrostic, but also enriched by rhyme. ~ Regards // paul
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 2:08 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your very kind words. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day with blessings..................
Ashley Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Dear Paula, your poem is so beautiful, expressive, loving and filled with gratitude. I love the poetry form you used as well as the rhyme scheme. Simply splendid! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 2:07 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your very kind words. So glad you like this one. I enjoyed writing it. Enjoy your day with blessings..................
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