My Song Revision
Original song: Jubilee Song by Jamie Rivera
It's a time of joy, a time of peace
A time when hearts are then set free
A time to heal the wounds of division
It's a time of grace, a time of hope
A time of sharing the gifts we have
A time to build the world that is one
Revised lyrics: Jubilee Song by Jamie Rivera
It’s day of happiness, a peaceful life
A day where minds being set free
A day to recover our bruises
It’s day of faith, a day of chance
A day of giving the things we can
A day unite together as one
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