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My Song of Painful Plea

Suddenly,wild flames thud out Of our little kerosene lamp Mocking flames danced on me With expertise. their hungry mouths Ate my perfumed flesh in glee My manful cries went heaven high That aunt Priscilla came running wild That Wednesday night of 10 November Began my song of painful plea Goat burnt skin as soft plum peeled Sneering scissors thrust stubborn gauze and Red rain rush quickly out, then When on it iodine oil is released Tormenting pains my body feel it's when I begin, my songs of painful plea My mouth tore in anguished laughter Myself been prisoner of frustrating pains When my eyes beheld my white hands And my skin embellished with ugly scars My soul could not but raise that song My song of painful plea My song of painful plea Echoes loud across the sky For my heart made fragments Of peaceful past, and a Library of scars in each tiny half My heart will take no more For I've done no wrong Let happiness be a distant dream To them who adulterated our kerosene. My song of painful plea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/3/2012 10:50:00 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Ingibo. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2011 2:25:00 AM
I watched your mood like a movie.How did I miss this worthy poem? Every line of this poem induces intense pity. I am very sorry for what happened to you. Congratulations for excelling the first round. Have a merry christmas
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ingibo. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 12:06:00 AM
Ingibo, CONGRATULATIONS !! On your poem being featured this week. Stopping by to read every poem on the home page. have yourself a wonderful week,..Linda
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations Ingibo on your fine poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:21:00 AM
Wow.... I feel your painful plea Ingibo... This is very descriptive and well written. I pray that your scars have healed... Have a Blessed Day Ingibo and thanks so much for sharing
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Muyideen Ayinla
Date: 8/5/2011 10:32:00 AM
Wow! Enjoyed reading this, so sad u have to go through such pains. God be with you. Keep writing.
Date: 6/27/2011 8:10:00 PM
HOw horrible. Do you carry a scar from this? I hope you are ok today? I was burned by boiling water all over my arm once and it is the worst pain imaginable so I feel real bad for you about this. Good imagery in your poem
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Ingibo Benson
Date: 6/28/2011 4:11:00 AM
Really horrible it was. And yes, I have a library of scars, though the wounds are still here, am fine. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 6/27/2011 9:48:00 AM
Wow! What a painful plea you gone with your words surrounded with sorrow. I can feel that pain in my body. May God help you by giving relief from all pains of your life.
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:37:00 AM
WoW! How horrible for you. I once had an accident as a child when boiling water spilled on my leg. I spent a year to heal and learn to walk again so I know of your pain. As I healed the doctors told us to smear the healing new skin with olive several times a day and slowly the scar deminished. God Bless you my friend. JB
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Date: 6/17/2011 5:43:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ingibo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 7:20:00 PM
Very descriptive and well put together, I like it! Well Done
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