My Son Is Right

blame and curse on him
for her son's forgotten coat -
innocent rain God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Thomas Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 11:44 AM
A mother's love is something often taken for granted by those fortunate enough to receive it. I do not think you have taken it for granted Jenish :)
Somadas Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 9:08 PM
Thank you FJ..Your words are inspiring..
Y. Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:29 AM
Hi Jenish, What a deep and powerful one-liner you have penned. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Somadas Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:40 PM
Thank you Alexis..
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 3:00 PM
- We have freezing wind and snow ... without a coat you get sick here ... but, summer rain is refreshing, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 10:21 PM
Lol..my experience..If i forget my umbrella, father will be angry at me.. but mother blames the rain..Thanks for your comment..
Rose  Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 6:28 AM
Wonderfully written and powerfully received dear Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 6:42 AM
Thank you...
Trifiatis Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 3:42 AM
Sublime dearest, Jenish! Happy New Year!
Somadas Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 4:05 AM
Thank you Demetrios.. Happy New Year..
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