My Son

some laypersons deceive only
useless poetry prose.

I own him as my son who knows
rhyme in life he goes

who loves sis and bro and parent.
and before Him bows

who is always caring for those
who live like a rose

Dr Zik
Jhelum Pakistan
July 01, 2024
I like this rhyme written in Zikelite poetic form
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December 7, 2024 at 9:31 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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