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My Soft Curtain

What I don't know; exactly what you expect to find It matters not; I leave authenticity behind Low, for all of the beautiful light that falls on me Lonesome I can not help but weep; intrinsically, Outside sadness; many rings inside internally Woeful my grove; but it is spectacular to see Take me down to the ground; such strength in gravity Reveal to me; all your deepest, melancholy Emotionally; thrown at me without a mind Enter my soft curtain; a solid trunk you'll find

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Hilo Poet

Date: 11/9/2023 2:31:00 PM

Anonomus, your metaphoric expressions were both riveting and enjoyable. Wonderfully, it leads to an impressive conclusion, may blessings be yours. Aloha, William

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/9/2023 6:20:00 PM

Mahalo William! Best Regards! A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 10/11/2023 4:04:00 PM

What a breathtaking willlow tree you're describing. You amazed me.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 10/11/2023 5:54:00 PM

I am a friend to all that chose to see the real me. I am a ghost to those that do not. Thank you for seeing the real me :) Fondly A.S.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/10/2023 6:37:00 PM

Very uniques. I felt this had double meanings in the lines. And much velvet like emotive softness. Thank you Pamgie xx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 10/11/2023 6:03:00 PM

You and I are the same of vein, my poetry is written for me; I choose to share it; not because I need to but because I want to. I respect your response on a cellular level. Warmly A.S.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/11/2023 7:27:00 AM

I never wrote when I was young, however, coring my life, I wrote on and off. Not poetry though.I do write directly. For me, that’s my catharsis.it takes 10 years to be a good poet. I am nowhere near that. And have zero desire to be published or famous,now or in the futire. Pangie x x

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 10/11/2023 4:00:00 AM

I find more catharsism in ambiguity; when I started writing at a young age it was to deal with hard experiences that I had. Working through those experiences required looking for answers in many different ways. Warmest regards A.S.