My So Called Friend

so many years just down the drain
      my so called friend
little did i know the horrible pain
     my so called friend
it came calling at your door 
     my so called friend
it will rote you to the core
        i said to you
     my so called friend
you didn't listen its now the end
      of my so called friend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bagnall Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 5:59 AM
A puzzle - I am left wondering what kille dthe friend off, but that's what make it interesting - nice rhymes - Welcome to poetry soup.
Chick Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 8:28 AM
thinking
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