My Sneakers

My sneakers made me jump high
All the way into the sky
Suddenly, the wind knocked me down
All the way into the ground
That cause the Shi to pass me by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 3:12 AM
Great imagery here and storytelling. Absolutely love the way you’ve written this. Brilliant flow of rhymes too.
Ward Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 12:50 PM
THANK-YOU SO MUCH. I'M GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT.
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