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My Sneakers

My sneakers made me jump high All the way into the sky Suddenly, the wind knocked me down All the way into the ground That cause the Shi to pass me by

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Date: 8/24/2023 3:12:00 AM
Great imagery here and storytelling. Absolutely love the way you’ve written this. Brilliant flow of rhymes too.
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Daisy Ward
Date: 8/25/2023 12:50:00 PM
THANK-YOU SO MUCH. I'M GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT.

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