My Sky

I stare into the sky in search of stars
The stars look at me and smile
My sky is my poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Paradis Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 8:39 AM
Oh, this is pretty.....I understand what is being said and i like it!!!!
Cantu Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 6:58 PM
Transitioning lyric techniques into the open dome; that was a good twist of reality my friend! Nice words, your poetry indeed belongs to the up high realm; thanks for sharing!!
Chircop Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 4:24 AM
you know i do that too,sometimes when a bad day comes to say hello,i just look at the sky,or at the stars and i say tomorrow will be better,the stars smile to you,who wouldn't little one?;-)im smiling too---charma
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