My Skeleton

My skeleton has brittle bones;
That’s what the test reveals,
Another prime example of
What aging often steals.

I could take some injections or
A course of daily pills
To build my bones back, just in case
I suffer any spills.

Though if I manage not to fall,
My bones are working fine.
Still, if I trip and break my hip,
I’ll know the fault is mine.

The quandary I am in is like
A coin toss - tails or heads?
To trust my balance not to fall
Or cave and take the meds?

Right now it’s 50 - 50.
Will my osteoporosis 
Leave my no-meds skeleton in peace
Despite my diagnosis?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 8:49 PM
Really? You're debating? Isn't calcium what's prescribed? Can't hurt you. ~ just saying, gw
Bauer Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 11:55 AM
I do take calcium, Gershon. The doc is recommending a prescription medicine with side effects that scare me…
Daniel Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 3:43 AM
A thoughtful write on a serious theme, Ilene...
Bauer Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 11:56 AM
Thank you, Joanna! I appreciate the comment…
Allison Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 2:39 PM
its hard to know what to do for the best Ilene - my mum, dad and mum's sister all had osteoporosis. Mum used to take 'calcichew' calcium tablet - will have to wait to see if I am eligible in time lol:-) hugs Jan x
Bauer Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 11:57 AM
Hope it skips you, Jan! I feel fine on the outside (aside from looking in the mirror!) but it’s weird to know that inside I’m crumbling away..
Conn Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 1:18 PM
The tests reveal you’re aging but the only question is: How naive are you ...
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