Jay Loveless Poet I do not know?

My Site

my brother 
doesnt write
and yet 
hes stealing my site

my brother 
misses my friend
its his fault 
shes his ex girlfriend

my brother doesnt even write
i told him to get the hell off my site
the site thats become home to me more than my house
the things on here i dont want him to yell out

brother if your reading im warning you one last time
stay away from me and write and learn
or stop, and ill put down my guns and you get off my site in turn

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Sara Kendrick September 25, 2009 at 1:31 PM A little sibling spat here. Keep writing. Sara P.S. I did not mean to devalue your poetry or anyones by just saying interesting or keep writing. I was going to use the keep writing as my trademark but I have had people to say something about it so I don't use it every time. I read a lot of these poems everyday and my saying it is interesting is just letting you know that I have been there. I will try to do better. Sara