Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

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Here is my sister Tone :)

 

- My Sister and Me - By : a Mjelde -

Tomorrow it is the first in December
And I'll open my first window in the Christmas calendar

My sister Tone, must extract two teeth at the dentist
... and give us a toothless smile ~ without breakfast






- Written by my youngest grandson
- 30.11.2016
- Adrian Andresen Mjelde 12 years :)

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Pashang Salehi December 9, 2016 at 1:33 AM Great Sense of humor.... Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2016 at 3:00 AM - Pashang, thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

Phyllis Babcock December 4, 2016 at 12:28 PM Glad to see another writer in your family. Great write Adrian. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen December 4, 2016 at 12:31 PM - He is very proud that I have posted this on Poetry Soup, Phyllis - hugs // Adrian og me :)

Alexis Y. December 4, 2016 at 9:42 AM Hi Anne-Lise, This is so sweet and hilarious as well. Thanks for sharing: -) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen December 4, 2016 at 11:34 AM - Alexis, thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

Paul Callus December 3, 2016 at 4:50 PM Such a witty sense of humour for one so young, Anne-Lise:) As for Tone, let her enjoy her Christmas Calendar...my daughter still does at 40 years of age!! Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen December 4, 2016 at 6:52 AM - I believe it is ok when you're 40 ... but not when you are seventeen :))) - Paul, thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

Abosede Ogundare December 2, 2016 at 11:01 AM This is so hilarious, and beautiful... what a way to welcome December! Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2016 at 11:47 AM - Abosede, thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

Eve Roper December 2, 2016 at 8:56 AM Hahaha... poor sis not right not to have breakfast Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2016 at 11:47 AM - Thank you Eve, for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2016 at 7:44 PM oh my, this is so precious. Thanks for sharing!! Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2016 at 8:04 AM - Andrea, thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

Carol B. December 1, 2016 at 7:04 PM Adorable :) Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2016 at 7:44 AM - Thank you for nice visit and lovely comments, Carlo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 1, 2016 at 2:42 PM Lovely and charming dear Anne-Lise, poetry runs in the family! . Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2016 at 2:47 PM - Adrian are dyslexic ... he has difficulty reading and writing - but lot of strange things that he has in his thoughts :) - Thank you for nice visit and lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

Tim Smith December 1, 2016 at 2:02 PM He is worried about his sister...how sweet Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2016 at 2:12 PM - Adrian is a loving and caring boy ... he was a bit worried about his sister Tone - It went fine ... but he was right; difficult to eat :) - Tim, thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

David Bose December 1, 2016 at 1:58 PM Thanks, Anne-Lise, for sharing your family with us. Brightened my day, especially the "without breakfast" thought. My best to Adrian. Dave Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2016 at 2:13 PM - Glad you enjoy this little smile from Adrian, David :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

Jan Allison December 1, 2016 at 1:25 PM aww how cute your grandson is - I hope Tone is fine at the dentist and she saves her advent chocolate for a treat later in the day:-)hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2016 at 1:31 PM - Tone 17 1/2 years now, Jan ... Advent calendar, sooo "childish" :))) - Thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)

Chris Green December 1, 2016 at 12:45 PM This is cute. What was that old show, Kids say the funniest things? The last two lines are priceless. Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2016 at 1:06 PM - They say lot of strange things ... he gave me a smile that I had to share with you :) - Thank you for nice visit and lovely comments, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)