My Sister

My sister Sharon is getting marry and I’m a brides maid I said can I say a speech but she said nay My sister is a lovely girl even if I say so my self and I like her faunas he’s got fine health So there’s my speech I love you sis and I hope you like this
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 3:29 PM
How could she not. The shape and sentiment are both beautiful. :)
Sanders Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 10:26 AM
I love how original this poem is well written poet
Scott Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 5:53 PM
cool; write welcome to soup x davidscott
Harrell Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Oh, the shape of the poem is gorgeous. Loving words for your sister. Enjoyed, Miriam. Love ya, Toquyen
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