My Shooting Star
you......
youre like a shooting star
that never dims
a steady flame
over uncertain boiling wax
of a crooked candle
in a darkend room
time on a clock
that goes away
but the hands still they remain
and you
the feeling of youre touch
that still remains
even when your gone
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