My Shiny Black Friend

I've found someone who loves me at last,
He takes six bullets and is shiny black,
He says he will grant me long lasting peace and love.
I trust him completely.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Beesley Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 7:30 AM
you got six and you're aimin em right straight for my cranium short and sweet but incomplete
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace